Suggestions: “What for?” instead of “Why’s that?” “I guess you would have trouble keeping up with me otherwise.” “Stupid thing!”
I like “cursed”. Is it totally wrong? I’d rather keep it.
No, “cursed” is completely right for this character!
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January 17th, 2011 at 01:06
Suggestions:
“What for?” instead of “Why’s that?”
“I guess you would have trouble keeping up with me otherwise.”
“Stupid thing!”
January 18th, 2011 at 19:16
I like “cursed”. Is it totally wrong? I’d rather keep it.
April 2nd, 2011 at 03:30
No, “cursed” is completely right for this character!